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Keeper of the Susu Pot

Table of Contents

  • Chapter 1 The Weight of the Tin
  • Chapter 2 Market Day Whispers
  • Chapter 3 The Broken Latch
  • Chapter 4 Counting the Empty
  • Chapter 5 Accusations in the Dust
  • Chapter 6 The First Footprint
  • Chapter 7 Blood and Palm Oil
  • Chapter 8 Shadows Behind the Stalls
  • Chapter 9 Secrets Among Sisters
  • Chapter 10 The Pawnshop Alley
  • Chapter 11 A Promise Made in Haste
  • Chapter 12 False Leads and Crooked Scales
  • Chapter 13 The Midnight Ledger
  • Chapter 14 Smoke and Mirrors
  • Chapter 15 A Debt Past Due
  • Chapter 16 The Riverbank Hideout
  • Chapter 17 Unraveling Threads
  • Chapter 18 Cornered at Sundown
  • Chapter 19 Betrayal's Face
  • Chapter 20 Street Justice Looms
  • Chapter 21 The Chase Through the Shanties
  • Chapter 22 Fractured Trust
  • Chapter 23 The Stash Unearthed
  • Chapter 24 Confronting the Circle
  • Chapter 25 Reckoning at Dawn
  • Chapter 26 The Full Measure

Chapter One: The Weight of the Tin

The rusted blue tin had no right to be as heavy as it was. It wasn’t the metal itself, which had worn paper-thin at the corners where Mama Tess had carried it tucked under her arm for fifteen years. It was the knowledge of what rested inside: forty-two blue-and-green notes, folded lengthwise, bound by dried rubber bands that smelled faintly of old gasoline and dust.

To anyone walking past the low wooden porch of Mama Tess’s compound in West End, the tin looked like a forgotten container for imported butter biscuits. That was the point. In a neighborhood where a leaky zinc roof could invite three generations of family squabbles, visual discretion was the first line of defense. But every person who paid into the weekly pot knew the precise chime the tin made when a heavy coin hit the bottom, or the silent, dense thud when a thick stack of bills was shoved beneath the false cardboard lining.

"Mama Tess, you are holding it like it will bite you," Comfort said, fanning herself with a flattened cardboard box that once held frozen tilapia. She sat on a low wooden stool, her knees turned out, her bright yellow headwrap crooked from a long morning at the market. "Count it again. Let me see it with my own eyes before the rain starts."

"If I count it again, the notes will wear out from my thumb," Mama Tess replied, though her hand remained planted on the lid. Her fingers were short, calloused at the tips from forty years of shelling cassava, sewing hem lines, and handling the gritty paper currency of the market. "You brought your three hundred cedis. I put it in. Your eye was there when I pushed it down."

"My eye was there, but my mind is on my sister’s daughter," Comfort grumbled, tapping a bare foot against the packed earth floor. "She needs the payout next week for the nursing school form. If that money goes missing, her father will make her marry the man who sells spare parts by the lorry station."

"Nothing goes missing from this pot," Mama Tess said flatly. She didn't raise her voice. She never needed to. When you spent three decades holding the community’s trust, raising your voice was a sign of weakness, like a butcher who lowered his price before the customer even asked for a discount.

The susu had twenty-four members this cycle. Market women, taxi drivers who pooled their night-shift tips, the tailor from down the gutter whose eyes were failing him, and two young men who ran an illegal internet booth near the chop bar. Every Friday afternoon, they filed onto Mama Tess’s porch, wiped their dusty feet on the frayed hemp mat, and dropped their share into her hands. And every month, one of them took the pot home to rebuild a roof, pay tuition, or restock a container with fresh bales of second-hand clothes from the docks.

It was an ancient arithmetic, built entirely on fear and shame. There were no bank slips, no stamp pads, no interest rates, and certainly no lawyers. If you failed to pay, everyone in the alley knew by nightfall. If you stole, the street didn't wait for the police land rover to bounce down the unpaved road; the street had its own court, its own bailiffs, and its own swift, merciless form of interest.

Mama Tess rose from her wooden armchair, the joints in her left knee popping loudly in the damp afternoon air. She carried the tin into her bedroom, stepping over the threshold that had been worn smooth by decades of bare feet. Her room smelled of menthol ointment, dried lavender, and the faint, coppery tang of iron pots.

She walked past the small iron bed with its flower-printed foam mattress, past the wooden wardrobe whose doors were held shut by a folded piece of paper, directly to the dark space behind her wardrobe. There sat the heavy earthen water jar—an old pot brought down from her home village when she was still a bride with tight skin and high cheekbones. The pot was dry now, long stripped of its water-cooling duties, its rim chipped and dark with decades of soot and dust.

She lowered the tin into the mouth of the clay jar, hearing the familiar, satisfying scrape of metal against earthenware. She covered the mouth with a heavy slab of polished granite, dropped a woven palm mat over the top, and pushed an old basket of unwashed cloth against the front. It was a ritual performed every Friday before sunset.

When she walked back out to the porch, Comfort was already gone, replaced by Kwesi, the tailor, who was standing by the porch step, wringing a grease-stained tape measure around his hand.

"Mama Tess," Kwesi said, leaning his shoulder against the wooden pillar. He smelled of machine oil and cheap gin. "The sky is turning purple over the water. It will pour before the night prayers."

"Then go home to your machine, Kwesi," she said, picking up her broom made of dried palm fronds. "The rain will rust your needles if you leave them on the bench."

"I came to ask... about next week," Kwesi said softly, lowering his eyes. His eyelids were heavy, reddened by the dim kerosene lamps he used to stitch shirts late into the night. "My cycle is three weeks away, but the man who sells the wool bolts from the port says he will sell to the boy from the high street if I don't give him a deposit tomorrow."

Mama Tess paused, her broom hovering an inch above the swept dirt. She looked at Kwesi—at the frayed collar of his shirt, at the yellowed soles of his plastic sandals.

"The pot belongs to Comfort next week," Mama Tess said clearly. "You know the order. It was drawn at the church hall in January. I do not rewrite the paper because someone’s cloth seller is in a hurry."

"Comfort can wait one week," Kwesi pleaded, taking a small step forward, his voice dropping to a whisper that barely reached past the dripping eaves. "Her niece is not going anywhere. The nursing school does not close its gate until next month. Just let me take half of the pot now, and I will replace it with my share plus twenty cedis from my market drop next Tuesday."

"No," Mama Tess said. It was not a harsh 'no', just a solid one, heavy as a stone dropped into deep water. "If I jump the order for you today, tomorrow Papa Joe will come saying his taxi engine needs a new fan belt. Then where is the susu? It becomes a market loan, and I am not a money-lender. A money-lender eats human flesh; I only guard the pot."

Kwesi stared at her for a long second. His jaw worked silently, a muscle twitching near his ear. He let out a slow, wet breath that smelled again of the local gin, turned without a word, and picked his way carefully down the steps, dodging the first fat drops of rain that were beginning to strike the tin roof like iron pellets.

Mama Tess watched him walk down the alley until his stooped silhouette vanished behind the cassava flour stalls. She felt a familiar, cold prickle at the back of her neck—the dull, aching weight that came with being the only person standing between twenty-four hungry mouths and the slender metal box in her dark room.

The rain hit all at once, a sudden, blinding sheet of grey water that swept in off the coast, drowning out the shouting of the street boys and the blunt hum of the generator at the beer bar down the road. Mama Tess sat back down in her armchair, pulled her shawl tightly around her shoulders, and closed her eyes.

The tin was safe behind the wardrobe. It was always safe. But as the thunder crashed overhead, rattling the iron sheets above her, she reached into her pocket and squeezed the brass key to her padlocked door until the edges bit deep into her palm.


Chapter Two: Market Day Whispers

By four in the morning, the rain had traded its fury for a thick, clinging mist that rose from the open gutters like steam off boiling porridge. Saturday brought the great market, the sprawling belly of the district that swallowed three square miles of mud, wood planks, and corrugated iron. Long before the sun crept above the oil palms to bake the coast in its usual salt-tinged heat, the market was already screaming. Handcarts with squealing ball bearings bounced over rutted dirt, porters with burlap sacks balanced on their shaved crowns grunted rhythmic warnings to clear the narrow alleys, and the fishwives from the beach were already splashing brine onto silver slabs of mackerel to keep away the early flies.

Mama Tess walked the perimeter path where the red mud gave way to the packed crushed shells of the middle lane. In her right hand, she swung an empty woven palm-leaf basket, its handles dark with the sweat of many years. In her left, tucked securely into the deep pouch of her apron, was a coin purse of coarse calico holding just enough small change to buy pepper, ginger, and a half-kilo of smoked catfish head for the weekend broth. She wore her work headwrap—faded indigo cotton with the frayed knot resting flat against the base of her skull—and moved with the deliberate, heavy-heeled stride of a woman who owed no one money and knew every ditch’s depth.

"Ah, Mama Tess! The sun has not even washed its face and you are already hunting catfish," called Auntie Mercy, sitting high behind a rampart of imported red onions. Mercy had two teeth missing on the left side of her mouth, which gave her greeting a hollow whistle, but she possessed the loudest voice on the dry goods lane. "Come, take these sweet ones from the north. Fresh off the truck from Bolga before the rain broke the bridge."

"Your onions are weeping, Mercy," Mama Tess remarked without breaking her stride, though she paused long enough to prod a papery red bulb with the knuckle of her thumb. "When an onion begins to sweat before five in the morning, it means the boy who packed them washed them in gutter water to add weight."

"God forbid such wickedness!" Mercy clapped both hands together, the copper bangles on her wrists clattering sharply. "Listen to the woman! Her eye is sharper than an awl. But come, Tess, lean your ear here. Did you hear about Kofi the electrician’s nephew? The one who went to Tema to work the loading cranes?"

"A boy with three rings in his ear and no sense in his skull," Mama Tess said, still inspecting the onions with unsparing detachment. "What about him?"

"He returned on the midnight bus," Mercy whispered, leaning forward over a sack of shallots so far that her breasts flattened against the rough jute. "Arrived wearing a brand-new pair of white foreign shoes that squeaked like a piglet. Not two hours later, two men from the union office were banging on his mother’s zinc door with iron rods. They say eighty meters of thick copper cable walked out of the depot on its own legs two nights ago."

Mama Tess gave a faint grunt, shaking her head. "A thief who wears white shoes into an alley of mud has already written his own confession. If he had brains, he would have stayed in Tema and bought dark boots."

"The union men didn’t call the sergeant at the station," Mercy added, lowering her voice until it barely scraped past her dry lips. "They took his mother’s standing fan and his uncle’s radio as deposit, and they told the boy if the cable does not return by church time tomorrow, they will fetch the harbor boys with the bicycle chains. You know how those Tema boys are when their bonus goes missing. They don't write statements; they break thumbs."

The market had no tolerance for those who touched shared bread. In West End, you could insult a man’s lineage, you could sleep with his cousin, and you could spit near his grandfather’s grave, and the matter might eventually settle over three bottles of schnapps and an elder's intervention. But money that belonged to the collective—the sweat of twelve people pooled to buy a net, or the coins collected to bury an orphan—was sacred by virtue of survival. A man who stole from the pot was not just a thief; he was a murderer who simply had not yet finished choking his victims.

Mama Tess bought two small bulbs of garlic and three dry onions, handing over the exact copper and nickel coins, and moved on down the lane.

As she neared the butcher’s section, the stench changed abruptly from damp earth and allium to raw iron, wet offal, and the bitter charcoal smoke from the singeing pits. Big Sammy, whose apron was permanently dyed the color of dried liver, stood over an enormous mahogany stump, bringing down a heavy iron cleaver with the precision of a clockwork pendulum. Thwack. Thwack. Ribs separated cleanly from the spine under his thick, hairy forearm.

"Mama Tess," Sammy bellowed over the rhythmic pounding, wiping a bead of grease from his brow with the greasy back of his hand. "You look like someone whose tea was made with salt water this morning. Why the long face? The susu was collected yesterday, wasn't it? You should be sitting on your porch eating sweet buns."

"A person who guards other people’s sweat does not eat sweet buns until the cycle is turned," she replied, stepping neatly over a puddle of red water that was draining slowly toward the open central gutter. "Comfort was at my door yesterday before the sky even thought of raining. Her tongue was sharp enough to slice tripe."

Sammy let out a booming laugh that shook his round belly against the butcher’s block. He drove the cleaver deep into the wood, where it stood upright, quivering slightly. "Comfort is always like that. If she buys three tomatoes, she will stand at the basket for forty minutes turning every one of them upside down to see if a worm slept there. But she has reason to sweat, Tess. Her husband’s people are already gathering at the family house in New Town. I saw his elder brother at the palm wine shed yesterday noon, bragging that a girl has no need for nursing school when there is a shopkeeper in Kaneshie willing to pay a double bride price for a girl with soft hands."

Mama Tess frowned, her jaw hardening. "The money is for the girl’s training. Comfort paid her three hundred cedis every Friday without missing once. Not even when the flood carried her wash basins away last October. If the brother-in-law touches that girl's payout, he will answer to me."

"You speak as if the brother-in-law has ears for women," Sammy said, leaning down to scoop a handful of salt into an open tray of liver. "He doesn't fear you, Mama. He only fears an empty bottle. But you watch out. Kwesi was hanging around the butchery this morning before the first light. He was asking if I had any hide scrapings he could take on credit to make glue."

"Kwesi was at my porch yesterday," Mama Tess said, keeping her tone smooth, giving nothing away. "His machine is tired."

"His machine is not tired; his liver is pickled," Sammy snorted. "He owed twenty cedis to the chop bar woman for three plates of goat pepper soup he ate last Tuesday. She went to his shop at five this morning and took the pedal right off his Singer machine. Carried it under her arm like a dead fowl. Said he wouldn't stitch another trouser seam until her bowl was filled. A tailor with no pedal is just an old man sitting in a chair looking at cloth."

Mama Tess felt a small, uneasy twitch beneath her left ribs, exactly where her mother used to say her gallbladder sat. Kwesi had not mentioned the pedal yesterday. He had only spoken of the cloth dealer from the harbor and the bolts of wool. A man who lied about the size of his fire was usually the first to start burning his neighbors’ fences to keep warm.

"If he owes twenty cedis, he should work the night shift on the loading docks instead of drinking gin by the gutter," she said aloud, her voice cool and steady.

"Tell that to his legs," Sammy scoffed, picking up his cleaver again. "The man's knees knock together like dry bamboo in the wind. If he tried to carry a sack of cement down the gangplank, he would end up at the bottom of the salt basin."

The cleaver came down again with a bone-jarring clack, ending the conversation. Mama Tess nodded her farewell and turned down the narrow alleyway that led toward the cloth sellers.

Here, the noise was different. It was not the wet, fleshy clatter of the meat stalls, but the dry, rustling hiss of wax print cotton being unrolled across rough wooden trestles. The colors were an explosion against the grey mud: brilliant indigos, hot golds, patterns of tortoises, keys, and birds escaping from open cages. The women who sat here did not shout; they murmured, smoothed cloth with long fingers, and kept their ledgers locked in metal biscuit boxes identical to the one resting inside the clay jar behind Mama Tess's wardrobe.

Near the corner where the fabric lane joined the spice market, three women were huddled together beneath a blue plastic tarpaulin, their heads nearly touching. One of them was Sister Vida, who sold church ribbons and thread, and the other was young Adjoa, who ran the small phone credit kiosk opposite the lorry park.

"I am telling you, he didn't even have his slippers on," Adjoa was saying, her voice pitched at that particular low hum women used when the news was too fresh to be shouted. "Just barefoot in the rain, running like a thief whose trousers were on fire."

Mama Tess slowed her steps, pretending to inspect a bolt of green Dutch wax that hung from a rafter by a piece of rusted wire.

"Who was running?" Sister Vida asked, her fingers nervously pleating a strip of white satin border. "Not the madman from the junction?"

"No! The boy from the internet booth. The tall one—Gideon," Adjoa whispered, glancing over her shoulder before leaning closer. "Last night, around midnight, when the storm was at its worst. My brother went out to check the zinc sheets on our chicken coop because the wind was lifting the nails. He saw Gideon sprinting past the gutter toward the high road. He was carrying a black plastic sack tucked under his elbow, holding it tight against his ribs like it was a baby."

"Maybe he was carrying computer parts," Sister Vida suggested, her spectacles sliding down her sweat-sheened nose. "Those boys are always buying screens and wires from the sailors."

"In that rain? Without a raincoat or an umbrella, running toward the main road where the night taxis wait?" Adjoa clicked her tongue sharply against her teeth, making that dry, dismissive sound that was older than the colony. Tsw! "A boy doesn't run through the ditch at midnight with computer parts unless those parts were burning his hands. And you know Gideon. He put into the susu this cycle, didn't he? He and that other rascal with the yellow hair."

Mama Tess felt the weight of her palm basket double in an instant. Gideon was one of the two boys from the internet booth. He had joined the circle four months ago, brought in on the recommendation of his grandmother, an old member who had died of the fever back when the currency still had two zeros fewer on the bills. Gideon had paid his share every week—scruffy, grease-spotted notes smoothed out until the edges lay flat, the money earned from typing school certificates and printing out fake lottery slips for the harbor boys. He was number sixteen in the twenty-four-person cycle. His payout was not due until the harmattan winds began in November.

"Did your brother see where he went?" Sister Vida asked, her eyes round behind the thick glass.

"Took the yellow taxi that parks behind the petrol pump," Adjoa said. "The one with the dented fender and the verse from Psalm 23 painted across the back window. The engine was already running before Gideon even shut the door. Zoom! Straight toward the bypass."

Mama Tess let go of the green cloth. The fabric swung back against the wooden frame, brushing her knuckles with a dry, dusty friction. She did not ask questions. To stop and ask Adjoa to repeat the story would be to show blood in the water. In the market, curiosity from a susu keeper was the same as a bank manager running into the town square with an unbuttoned shirt. It signaled panic before the fire even reached the ceiling.

She turned away, her basket still half-empty, and began the walk back toward the lane of the provision sellers.

The market was filling up now, the morning heat beginning to press down through the low canvas and plastic awnings until the air felt thick, heavy with the smell of scorched palm oil, rotting cabbage, diesel exhaust, and wet hair. Children with metal trays of cold water balanced on their heads weaved through the crowd, crying their wares in sharp, bird-like trebles: "Pure water! Ice water! Cold water here!"

Mama Tess walked faster, her bad knee sending a sharp, thumping ache up into her hip with every third step. It was eight in the morning. The compound would be waking up. The tenants would be sweeping the yard, washing their aluminum pots at the shared standpipe, and arguing over whose turn it was to clear the leaves from the kitchen drain.

As she reached the edge of the market where the timber trucks unloaded their heavy green logs, she nearly ran into Papa Joe, the taxi driver. He was standing beside his battered brown vehicle, a rag in his hand, vigorously scrubbing bird droppings off the windscreen. His car smelled of stale cigarette smoke, engine coolant, and the cheap pine-scented cardboard tree that dangled from the rearview mirror.

"Mama Tess! Mind your toes," Papa Joe called out, stepping back from the front bumper. "These log boys don't look where they drop their chains. One slip and you are missing three toes."

"My toes have survived fifty years of this market, Joe," she said, stopping by his door. "You are up early for a man who drove the evening shift."

"The evening shift was dry like an old bone," Joe spat, tossing the dirty rag into a plastic bucket of grey water. "Nobody was moving after that thunder started. The rain turned the high street into a lagoon. I spent two hours stuck behind a timber truck near the roundabout because the driver was afraid his tires would sink into the shoulder."

"Did you see the boys from the internet shop?" she asked, her voice deliberately mild, like a grandmother asking after school children. "I need one of them to help me read the electric bill. The company sent a white paper with small print that hurts my eyes."

Joe paused, the rag dripping over his foot. He looked at her sideways, his small, dark eyes narrowing slightly beneath the rim of a faded blue baseball cap. Joe was fifty-eight, had four wives across three different coastal towns, and knew every piece of rust on every vehicle that operated between the harbor and the market.

"The small one with the yellow hair was at the petrol station around dawn," Joe said slowly. "He was buying kerosene in a plastic jug. But Gideon? I haven't seen Gideon since yesterday afternoon when he was arguing with the lotto operator over a five-cedi ticket."

"A lotto ticket?"

"Gideon likes the numbers too much," Joe said, shaking his head with the weary disdain of an older gambler who had already lost his youth to the same game. "He has an uncle in Kumasi who sends him lucky combinations by telephone every Friday morning. The boy takes whatever small coins he gets from the computer machine and throws them down the hole. Yesterday he was shouting that his numbers were going to drop by Saturday noon. Said he was going to buy an outboard motor and take it to his mother’s village to start a fishing crew."

Mama Tess felt the skin across her forehead pull tight, dry as salted fish. "A lotto ticket does not buy an outboard motor."

"It does if you are twenty years old and your belly is full of wind," Joe grumbled, turning back to his windscreen. "If you see him, tell him he owes me four cedis for the trip to the spare parts yard last Wednesday. He said he would pay when he got his weekend cut, but these boys... their hands are like strainers. Everything runs through."

"I will tell him," Mama Tess said quietly.

She did not buy the fish heads. She left the market through the western gap, where the path cut behind the public bathhouse and the wall of the Methodist primary school. Her basket contained only the few onions and the garlic, rattling around in the bottom like dried beans in an empty gourd.

The rain was gone, replaced by a dull, white sky that offered no breeze, only a flat, humid weight that sat on the neck like an ox yoke. The alley leading to her compound was quiet, save for the chickens scratching around the roots of the wild neem tree and the dull thud-thud of a mortar and pestle from two houses down.

When she reached her wooden gate, she did not push it open immediately. She stood with her hand resting on the grey, weathered timber, listening.

Inside the compound, she could hear the normal morning sounds: the splashing of wash water, the shrill voice of the girl who lived in room four singing a hymn about the blood of redemption, the dry scraping of an old broom across the dirt yard. Everything sounded ordinary. Everything sounded exactly as it had sounded for thirty years.

Yet the hair on the back of Mama Tess’s arms refused to lie down.

A susu was not money; it was peace. As long as the blue tin remained in the dark jar behind the wardrobe, the women sold their fish with light hearts, the tailor bought his needles on credit because his turn was coming, and the taxi drivers fixed their broken axles with money that had been pulled from twenty-four pockets at once. But if the pot cracked, the peace would crack with it, splintering into twenty-four pieces of sharp glass that would cut every throat in West End.

She pushed the gate open. The iron hinges gave their familiar, high-pitched squeak.

In the center of the yard, the young woman from room four stopped singing, looked up from her washbasin with soapy hands, and offered a quick, dutiful nod. "Good morning, Mama Tess. You came back quick from the market."

"The fish was not fresh," Mama Tess replied, keeping her voice even as she walked toward her own porch.

She climbed the three wooden steps, her sandals slapping softly against the planks. The padlock hung from the iron hasp on her front door, exactly as she had left it. It was a heavy, square brass lock, imported from Germany thirty years ago by her late husband, its body scratched and darkened by years of coal dust and sea air.

She reached into her apron pocket, her fingers finding the heavy brass key. The key was cold, though the morning was already hot. She fitted it into the keyhole, turned it until the internal mechanism clicked with a heavy, satisfying thud, and pulled the lock free.

She opened the door, stepped over the worn wooden threshold, and pulled the door shut behind her, plunging the small room into the dim, cool gloom of shuttered windows.

The air inside smelled of menthol, lavender, and old paper. Exactly as it always did.

Mama Tess set her market basket on the small deal table by the door. She stood still for five seconds, letting her eyes adjust to the darkness, her heart hammering against her ribs with a rhythm that had nothing to do with her bad knee.

Then she walked past the iron bed, rounded the corner of the wooden wardrobe, and looked down into the narrow shadow between the cedar boards and the lime-washed wall.

The woven palm mat was still there. The heavy slab of polished granite was still resting on top of the old clay water pot.

Mama Tess let out a long, slow breath through her nose, feeling foolish. She was an old woman letting the market women’s idle gossip rattle her bones. Kwesi was just a drunk tailor with a broken sewing machine; Gideon was just a foolish boy chasing lotto numbers; and Comfort was just an anxious aunt trying to save her niece from an early marriage. The world had always been full of desperate people, and the pot had always survived them.

She reached down, took hold of the edges of the granite slab, and lifted it.

The slab was heavy—ten kilos of solid stone cut from the river quarry. She set it carefully on the floorboards, avoiding any sound that might carry through the thin partition wall to room two. Then she reached her arm deep into the mouth of the dark, dry jar.

Her fingers went down. Down through the cool, smooth throat of the earthenware pot. Down until her knuckles hit the bottom.

Her hand swept the interior circle.

Once.

Twice.

There was nothing there.

No rusted blue tin. No smell of old gasoline and dried rubber bands. Only the fine, dry dust that had settled at the bottom of the pot since the day she had brought it from her mother's village forty years before.


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